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03/15/2010 (6:38 am)

Could someone please tell me what's wrong with my sentence?

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  • I was sitting around, procrastinating on my english paper, and I wanted to figure out how to say "I'm writing my paper."

    My grammar is not up to par, but I thought I'd give it a shot anyway. Can anyone tell me what's wrong with my sentence?

    わたし　の　ろんぶん　しっぴつ　です.

    I'm just trying to figure out if it's grammatically correct, if I'm missing any particles, etc.

    Thanks :D

    p.s. Sorry for the lack of Kanji, I don't know enough characters yet.


  • わたし　の　ろんぶん　しっぴつ　です.

    Assuming the ga after ronbun, this would mean, "my paper is a writing." You want a verb, but shippitsu is a noun. Then you have to change the verb into present progressive to mean "am writing."


  • I'm writing my paper.

    ---> Watashi wa sakubun o kaite imasu.


  • wooooo I was way off. Sonofagun.







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